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[Brennan's World Episode 1]

need improvement but promising

This movie isnt the best movie that I have seen, nor is it the worst, but to be honest its kind of 3rd rate...(and thats coming from me). Not saying that its bad though. You have a good plot and a nice array of characters. All you need is practice and improvement. Your writing will become better with work and your animation will also improve.

One hint is to try practice flash by copying other peoples characters for fun, like some of Legendary Frog's characters or PDK's characters to help improve your own style. I dont mean to ramble, but just take time to examine your own style and others. Find stuff that works for you...and you will become a great flash artist.

P.S: to anyone who mocks this flash movie can just bend over and take it up the a$$.

Blackan responds:

first of if you mean perfect kirby it's PK not PDK and second my style has been used for a few years so I'm kinda attached to it But I'll might some changes to it in the future, I'll might make samples of each flash artist of what a certin character with each style later on

[Fuckin Awesome]

...do i need to say it...Fucking Awesome

your video was well...fucking awesome.
Its so good that I dont even care about the animation, because the joke is fucking awesome...keep it up

Ashy-T responds:

Thanks very much =D

[Xunmato ep1]

great start

This is a pretty origional series and its kind hearted humor made me laugh and smile. I only gave one for style because everyone is drawing anime now a days, but you cartoon is still good. Im sure that you'll be able to create a second episode and top your first. keep up the good work.

Godlimations responds:

thanks, I'm happy you have faith in me, and I will top the next one, coz the first one is almost always the worst (according to my opinion) but thanks once again

[FFVI: The Day After Part9]

movie good

This movie is good, but I think that sometimes sprite movies can be pretty repetative. Its just pre modeled characters moving on the screen.
Many people like it, but it gets less interesting everytime i see it.

Here is a suggestion, if you can do it. Try putting in your own animation in your flash as cut scenes or battles to make the movie more exiting and origional. Try that; I dont think anyone else has.

All in all movie good and keep it up

Vinstigator responds:

Sorry, I can't do any animation. Story is the main thing, it's what gets me those high scores! The only movie I did without sprites was FFVI: The Day After - Part 1. It actually has over a 3.00 and it was just text effects! Goes to show you what a good story can get you. Well I'm taking a different approach with sprite movies.

A lot of them are just action packed and non-story orientanted, but I'm about to change that. Just look at part 4 of my series and you'll know what I'm talking about :)

[FFI3:War of the crystals]

You must finish!

THIS IS REALLY COOL. How did you set the opathicy settings and do that trick when the character disperses and forms another character...anyway.

The story is really cool and i cannot wait for the
conclusion

Hyper-Shadow-Death responds:

eh that series is soo long over gone too many people hated it check out ctc friend or foe if u havnt yet.

[Ninja episode 1]

This is a start

Your plot and work is very good, but there is room for improvement...
I would suggest using line tools for buildings because they looked kind of messy, and your animation will definatly improve over time.

Your mininture ninjas fighting were awesome and you will improve with practice.

keep it up

Hyper-Shadow-Death responds:

thank you its nice to hear , and yes since this is my first shot at fbf i will improve over time.

[Shards of Embrosia]

this is a good start

Yes. This does seem like it would become a very good series. Since your only using video game sprites, it doesnt really impress me that much. I suggest that you try adding some cinematics. The plot does seem interesting though

hope you get better at it and it progresses

DisgruntledPanda responds:

Thanks for the ideas, I'm gonna work on it more, Thanks